tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post2155622324889333351..comments2023-06-27T04:18:43.985-07:00Comments on Erin Lange: teasEr tuesDayerinjadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07209791582504174374noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-54820841196713599962010-04-28T19:01:39.104-07:002010-04-28T19:01:39.104-07:00Haha. It's funny and a little sad too. Great m...Haha. It's funny and a little sad too. Great mix of emotions. Love the voice too.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526875813399934443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-8054464921837476292010-04-28T02:58:10.976-07:002010-04-28T02:58:10.976-07:00The voice is amazing. I like how she says that she...The voice is amazing. I like how she says that she loves her dad deep down, but doesn't like him LOL!Kathy Bradeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01370707259209847339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-67975677275682618672010-04-27T19:01:07.660-07:002010-04-27T19:01:07.660-07:00Great voice, love the premise, and I already like ...Great voice, love the premise, and I already like the MC. :DEllenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17202494819302527977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-12796584911475570492010-04-27T18:24:08.108-07:002010-04-27T18:24:08.108-07:00And now I want pecan waffles. Seriously, the premi...And now I want pecan waffles. Seriously, the premise sounds great. As tough as this kid sounds, you can hear the pain behind it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-872594676050446102010-04-27T15:41:39.197-07:002010-04-27T15:41:39.197-07:00Wow, this is amazing. I love the way he talks abou...Wow, this is amazing. I love the way he talks about him mom trying to get him to lose weight. Loved all of this.Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01846922950214539315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-70619109040107305082010-04-27T07:24:33.648-07:002010-04-27T07:24:33.648-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Rebecca A. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14124059241043445352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-82631641780919786082010-04-27T07:17:59.005-07:002010-04-27T07:17:59.005-07:00I LOVE the voice on this. Kinda sucks about the da...I LOVE the voice on this. Kinda sucks about the dad, though. :/ <33Rebecca A. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14124059241043445352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-48668454447519636232010-04-27T07:02:58.754-07:002010-04-27T07:02:58.754-07:00AWESOME tease! more please :)AWESOME tease! more please :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13612218172442721987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-37862735760630155022010-04-27T06:25:23.425-07:002010-04-27T06:25:23.425-07:00"I mean, I knew he loved me somewhere deep… d..."I mean, I knew he loved me somewhere deep… deep down, and I loved him. We just didn’t like each other very much" ~perfect!<br /><br />Instead of shrinking (like is more common) your MC is expanding..which is such an effing awesome change :DBidishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382938442171208326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-43528445110388633562010-04-27T05:35:07.022-07:002010-04-27T05:35:07.022-07:00very interesting teaser and it flows really well. ...very interesting teaser and it flows really well. awesome idea!Imanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17516057440642502088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-13386588847952423382010-04-27T05:25:02.602-07:002010-04-27T05:25:02.602-07:00Interesting premise! I'd like to read more!Interesting premise! I'd like to read more!Karla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-33807201916869975862010-04-27T04:58:41.881-07:002010-04-27T04:58:41.881-07:00Wow! Sounds like this has a seriously interesting ...Wow! Sounds like this has a seriously interesting premise.Kaitlin Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01218406803223729204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-65080022576197426212010-04-27T03:58:51.788-07:002010-04-27T03:58:51.788-07:00Lol nice teaser. Dude grows fat in order to get aw...Lol nice teaser. Dude grows fat in order to get away from his dad's football madness. That's actually a great idea!Glen Akinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647296775230237162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954962135021866321.post-87493942212156804342010-04-27T03:39:36.709-07:002010-04-27T03:39:36.709-07:00I loved your last excerpt from Butter, and I love ...I loved your last excerpt from Butter, and I love this one, too. Wish I could read the entire book. :DSusanne Winnackerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07931371784917865242noreply@blogger.com